you just had to give us that cliff hanger didn't you? lol its all good, this story is getting juicy and i love itt!

Ooh, tricksy Marla. She's plotting something and I have a bad feeling. I was actually surprised-I thought everything would hit the fan sooner than this, but so far nothing.

Good chapter-it brightens my day! Keep updating!

Hey just want to say while I'm loving your story my patience is wearing thin with Elise. I can't believe she is still keeping quiet. The longer she keeps quiet, the worse Kane's reaction is going to be when he finds out.

I'm positive now Marla is working with Ryne and she probably switched the report. I'm also positive Marla is trying to set Elise up to make it look like she's cheating on Kane.

Amazing! :D

Now all you have to do is UPDATE like now.

Also, Marla is totally up to something.

(Seeing as how you already know this.) And I can't wait for the drama. :D

Yes, I want to see Kane get mad, WHY? It will make my day. :)

what's Marla got up her sleeve? i still dont' trust her and think that she should have told Kane... he would have forgiven her... please update soon

Haybell :)

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I'm going to use my magical reader-skills to make Marla disappear :)

great job lol

Marla is a biatch. And i still think it was her in Rynes car who knocked elise over at the beginning.

ooh! Marla is such a manipulator! oh well, this should be interesting, and I'm still waiting to see when the diary gets turned against Elise, lol, great update!

Oh my goodness! Marla is such a conniving witch! She totally wants to break up Kane and Elise! I do NOT like her one bit. I just know she is going to tell Kane and be all: "I'm a true friend to you, Kane, and I have to tell you something..." I just know it! She's going to get him thinking all paranoid and then he is going to start connecting things and making things bigger then they are! UGH! I want to slap her!

Moving on...I loved the chapter, like always, and can not wait until you update!

-lionandthelamblove7

great chapter! love this story!

Man Marla is taking Elise down, and Elise is not even thinking anything of it...stupid perfume...now I know why Marla was sneaking around their room...this is not going to end well, I can see it now...

I have no idea why the perfume smell is familiar to them but I guess we will find out soon but I figured the red car was Ryne and I'm still convinced Bryan is going to see him.

Marla is one conniving B**ch, lol sorry for the language but she makes me angry. I don't know what she plans to do with the diary that could help her but I'm guessing either she may write false entrys of when Elise went to see Bryan to make it seem she was cheating or she is just using the diary to get info on Elise to use against her.

She's right honesty is the best policy and she NEEDS to tell Kane the truth. I really don't think he would be mad at all if she explained to him about how she cleared things up with Bryan.

I'm excited to see what will happen when she is in heat and if Kane decides to blood bond.

-Liz :D

Marla is PLOTTING! Nothing good will come of it!

Aha! I had suspected that it was Ryne's car. Anyway, I can't decide on whether or not I like Marla. On one hand, she could just be lonely and wanting attention. However, she could be conniving, up to no good, and the one who turned Ryne crazyy. I wasn't sure how the perfume situation was going to turn out either. Ugh. Confuzzled.

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great jobby