Reviews for The Mating
Minzy chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
Heehee, I love this story!
kam-westlake chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
its good that Bryan realised that what they had was a brother sister relationship. but another wolf wanting to strike out on his own? why does that sound like Ryne to me? cant wait to see whats going to happen with everyone.
slowdear chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
I love the meeting between Elise and Bryan. It's very cute and I really like how they moved on and realized what they had was young love. I really thought Bryan would be still angry but I'm glad he's not. Elise really need an old friend to count on.

I have a feeling that Marla is up to no good. I thought that after the attack she would change but I guess she still really wants Kane. I'm going to assume that Marla is going to tell Kane about Elise meeting another guy or. I have a really bad feeling but I'm hoping that I'm wrong.

Don't worry about now being able to write everyday. I think it's amazing how much you're writing. Thank you so much for this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
professormandy chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
O, she could get in big trouble.
jennso03 chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
Marla sure is acting suspicious

love the story! :D
Fightingrose chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
I think I totally know where this is going but I can't wait to see if I'm right or not, I'm glad Bryan and Elise are cool now, can't wait to see what comes next!
NovelS chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
oh no! is it ryne?
charm en route chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
I feel like Elise's boss was told to hire her by Kane. I guess because he got a call during her interview and then right after that he decided to hire her.

Also, I think that Kane is going to find out about Elise meeting Bryan and do something stupid. This might have to do with the fact that Marla is conniving.

Haha, anyway, nice story.
lionandthelamblove7 chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
Oh my gosh! Is Marla going to somehow tell Kane that she saw her with someone, or is she going to say that Elise told her to tell him to meet her at a certain time and he saw them kiss! Oh, I'm dying here~! *not literally* But still! Loved it and can not wait for more!

cytl101 chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
let me guess: Kane heard the "I love you, too!" part... :)

great job
AndItMovesUsAll chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
Wow, that went better than i expected, i cant believe she didnt spot that he was probably talking about Ryne,and i hope to god Marla wasnt watching because all of their actions pointed to an affair.
anonymous8D chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
I'm still pondering WHY was Marla in Kanes bedroom

and what will Kane do when he finds out about Bryan and elises meeting...

So many unanswered questions...*sigh*
HeARmeRaWR chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
Oh man! I just know something bad is going is going to happen. I can just feel it! But before anything happens I just want to say, I hate Marla! I know she's going to do something or the other.

I also love that Bryan and Elise have finally come to terms with one another and have a platonic relationship...I have a suspicion that the person he's meeting up with is Ryne though...Idk but it seems possible. lol
pbgurl chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
I'm having this bad feeling in the pit of my stomach that Kane saw the whole exchange and thinks Elise is in love with Bryan and that they are going to meet again becuase they have been seeing eacother behind his back. But I hope it's wrong!:(

Lol, another guess is that the other wolf that Bryan could be meeting is Ryne, maybe...?

I'm gettin' worried...

-Liz :D
midnight84118 chapter 27 . 12/6/2009
lol great job
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