|Reviews for The Mating|
| NovelS chapter 23 . 11/30/2009
well, that is not something to get mad about!
| anonymous8D chapter 23 . 11/30/2009
I have no clue why he's angry...
But I'm secretly glad it's Marla he's mad at :)
my feelings for her character constantly changes, pity for her getting beat up, anger for stealing Elise's time away from Kane and hate for when she lies.
| CoryD chapter 23 . 11/30/2009
I think Marla & Ryne are playing an intricate game...
| Destiny1406 chapter 22 . 11/30/2009
grr... no one likes marla... update soon
| Arrdee chapter 22 . 11/30/2009
I think it was great that you allowed them time to develop their relationship so it wouldn't seem like those really corny love novels. That is what I really like about this story. It is very much real, but it includes the mystery and beauty of werewolves(which is just really awesome! I love werewolves! XD).And the details you pour out intricately into this piece just makes it even better than it already is.
All I can say is, THANK GOD I'VE FOUND THIS! lmao. I don't like to rush updates and I don't plan on rushing you too because I wouldn't want it to affect the outcome of the newer chapters. Savour the writings dude! I know I am! XD
P.s: I may not be rushing you for updates, but I really, really, REALLY, look forward to them lol. You my friend (I'm just assuming here XD) have a gift (that I'm not assuming lol) so don't waste it. Ever.
| Hawaiianlover chapter 22 . 11/29/2009
Marla just has to ruin everything, huh?
That's a big bummer.
I wonder if Marla was acting or if it was real and Ryne was actually hurting her.
Hm... I am curious to know what happens next.
Great Story ;]
| Downtown Detours chapter 22 . 11/29/2009
I hate Marla.
Why isn't Elise acting like an alpha mate? She gave that whole 'must be dominant' speech in the beginning, but everytime Marla says/does something she just stands off to the side all shocked or some bull. She doesn't even tell Kane about her! Stupid weak girl ):
Interesting story though. I love werewolf stories.
| to fall or to jump chapter 22 . 11/29/2009
THis story is so awesome! I love the characters! Elise is funny and lucky to have Kane- even if he's being kind of dumb at the moment... especially about Marla...
| miquest chapter 22 . 11/29/2009
You cant leave us at a cliffhanger like this... cant wait for the next chappie.. also I'm very happy with the pace of the story.
| Taren Elle chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
OMFreakin'G lol I didn't review the last chapter but I love the development between Kane and Elise, I'm also a big description nut too but MARLA GEEZ...It would be her wouldn't it lol...Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
| cytl101 chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
...not that Marla is a good damsel-in-distress for Kane...
great job :)
| anonymous8D chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
HAHAS. I figured out how to review. :)
out of all the people... It had to be HER :o
I still love it though :)
| MasonJ chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
Aww why is kane helping marla? I think she deserves wat ever ryne going to do 2 her.
Unless... Its a trik... and marla is faking it whilst ryne goes after Elise.
oo i can wait 4 th next chap
UPDATE I NEED TO KNOW!
| NovelS chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
i just cant bring myself to like marla! usually i feel pity for the girls like her, but i guess i have a strange feeling that she is plotting with Ryne..? i am probly wrong, but oh well, its fun trying to guess!
| RosaBree chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
I LOVE THIS STORY! I get supper excited whenever I get an email about a new chapter. I have one suggestion: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put up some pictures of the characters! It would make my life. Thank you for your awesome writing and just plain awesomeness!