Reviews for The Mating
NovelS chapter 23 . 11/30/2009
well, that is not something to get mad about!
anonymous8D chapter 23 . 11/30/2009

I have no clue why he's angry...

But I'm secretly glad it's Marla he's mad at :)

my feelings for her character constantly changes, pity for her getting beat up, anger for stealing Elise's time away from Kane and hate for when she lies.

Great story!
CoryD chapter 23 . 11/30/2009
I think Marla & Ryne are playing an intricate game...
Destiny1406 chapter 22 . 11/30/2009
grr... no one likes marla... update soon

Haybell :)
Arrdee chapter 22 . 11/30/2009
I think it was great that you allowed them time to develop their relationship so it wouldn't seem like those really corny love novels. That is what I really like about this story. It is very much real, but it includes the mystery and beauty of werewolves(which is just really awesome! I love werewolves! XD).And the details you pour out intricately into this piece just makes it even better than it already is.

All I can say is, THANK GOD I'VE FOUND THIS! lmao. I don't like to rush updates and I don't plan on rushing you too because I wouldn't want it to affect the outcome of the newer chapters. Savour the writings dude! I know I am! XD


P.s: I may not be rushing you for updates, but I really, really, REALLY, look forward to them lol. You my friend (I'm just assuming here XD) have a gift (that I'm not assuming lol) so don't waste it. Ever.
Hawaiianlover chapter 22 . 11/29/2009
Marla just has to ruin everything, huh?


That's a big bummer.

I wonder if Marla was acting or if it was real and Ryne was actually hurting her.

Hm... I am curious to know what happens next.

Great Story ;]
Downtown Detours chapter 22 . 11/29/2009
I hate Marla.

Why isn't Elise acting like an alpha mate? She gave that whole 'must be dominant' speech in the beginning, but everytime Marla says/does something she just stands off to the side all shocked or some bull. She doesn't even tell Kane about her! Stupid weak girl ):

Interesting story though. I love werewolf stories.
to fall or to jump chapter 22 . 11/29/2009
THis story is so awesome! I love the characters! Elise is funny and lucky to have Kane- even if he's being kind of dumb at the moment... especially about Marla...
miquest chapter 22 . 11/29/2009
You cant leave us at a cliffhanger like this... cant wait for the next chappie.. also I'm very happy with the pace of the story.
Taren Elle chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
OMFreakin'G lol I didn't review the last chapter but I love the development between Kane and Elise, I'm also a big description nut too but MARLA GEEZ...It would be her wouldn't it lol...Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
cytl101 chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
o action!

...not that Marla is a good damsel-in-distress for Kane...

great job :)
anonymous8D chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
HAHAS. I figured out how to review. :)

out of all the people... It had to be HER :o

I still love it though :)
MasonJ chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
Aww why is kane helping marla? I think she deserves wat ever ryne going to do 2 her.

Unless... Its a trik... and marla is faking it whilst ryne goes after Elise.

oo i can wait 4 th next chap

NovelS chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
i just cant bring myself to like marla! usually i feel pity for the girls like her, but i guess i have a strange feeling that she is plotting with Ryne..? i am probly wrong, but oh well, its fun trying to guess!
RosaBree chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
I LOVE THIS STORY! I get supper excited whenever I get an email about a new chapter. I have one suggestion: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put up some pictures of the characters! It would make my life. Thank you for your awesome writing and just plain awesomeness!
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