Reviews for The Mating
Fightingrose chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
aww, Kane should have just let Ryne eat her and continued on up those stairs, I was kind of anticipating what was coming next. shoot. well, maybe next time!.
MelGrl chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
ah, so cruel! ughh a cliffhanger. thnks for the update though!
fictionalxbliss chapter 22 . 11/28/2009
Hm, I wonder if Marla is working up an evil plan with Ryne behind Kane's back. o.o
cytl101 chapter 21 . 11/28/2009
that's sweet :)

great job
kone4 chapter 21 . 11/28/2009
This is a really interesting development in the story. I have a bad feeling about Marla, Ryne, and Brian... could they be possibly plotting against Kane?

I like Helen. I think she's a good maternal figure for the couple. Please don't kill her off.
NovelS chapter 21 . 11/28/2009
I like how you are showing that they are starting to progress into a relationship instead of them madly loving and trusting each other completly.
illegalmoonshine chapter 3 . 11/27/2009
I feel bad for the poor girl.

Well, once again this was written well.

illegalmoonshine chapter 2 . 11/27/2009
Poor Bryan. I feel so bad for him.


That poor dude.

Nice chapter.

illegalmoonshine chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Nice chapter.

I personally am glad that I found this since it was written a few years ago.

Destiny1406 chapter 21 . 11/27/2009
this was good, but i would like to see more action if you don't mind me saying. i thinkg right now it's kinda slow, and has a little too much description. dont' get me wrong, i like the story, but it needs more action and i dont mean just sex... i want some type of damsel in distress moments... what happened to the red car? are we going to find out who the driver is?

Haybell :)

PS: update soon
DarkxImagination chapter 21 . 11/27/2009
Aw... I loved the ending how they just seemed so comfortable with each other its so heart warming. ] Also I am SUPER happy that he ignored marla. She totally deserves that and more. Lol. I can't wait to read the next chapter im so addicted. Thanks 4 the updates.
I Read Your Diary chapter 20 . 11/27/2009
I really enjoy this story and that you update so quickly, it's refreshing from all the other stories where we have to wait weeks for the next chapter.

Elise's passiveness annoys me a bit, if I was her I would be trying to expose Marla's true colors and try to get Kane to catch her in the act of being the real bitch she is. I have a feeling she is working with Ryne in trying to destroy the pack and their habitat.

Anyway, the plot is really interesting and has kept me hooked since the start, I couldn't go to sleep because I wanted to know what happened x). The writing and imagery is well done, although there are some exchanging or leaving out of words and spelling errors. But every story harbors, to some degree, a bit of grammatical error, if you need a beta just let me know ;]

I can't wait to read the next one, I'm happy to know that the next chapter will be up in a few days instead of a few weeks, I'm an impatient reader x)


NovelS chapter 20 . 11/26/2009
I love your fast updating:)
fictionalxbliss chapter 20 . 11/26/2009
Being Alpha sucks. Elise can't even fit in some steamy loving with her mate. I would get annoyed pretty quick if I was in her shoes. Interesting chapter!

Happy Turkey Day!
cytl101 chapter 20 . 11/26/2009

Kane's upset with Marla

I like this chapter :)


great job
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