Reviews for The Mating
Hawaiianlover chapter 12 . 11/18/2009
i hope you carry on with this story! It seems like a story that should be. L0l. & the length solution is funny. The readers that do whine about the chapter length should just read two chapters at the same time. (x

Well good chapter.
cytl101 chapter 12 . 11/18/2009

I understand that work and family comes first :)

great job on the chapter
blackrule chapter 12 . 11/18/2009
I love the environmental twist you've given it lol I studied Environmental Science all through high school. It's a very fascinating subject. I don't really care about the length of the chapters. Sometimes I wish they were longer but honestly I don't care as long as there are lots of them, and they come out steadily. Anyway looking forward to another chapter, keep up the excellent work :D
Bree Munch chapter 12 . 11/18/2009
even though your chapters are short/

i love it! keep it up YO.
Destiny1406 chapter 11 . 11/18/2009
I personally, and i think i speak for a lot of your readers, that i would love longer chapters. I try to have mine at least over 30 words! lol how long are yours?

Haybell :)
Hawaiianlover chapter 11 . 11/17/2009
i loved this chapter as in all the other chapters.

I have to admit that I was a bit freaked out when Kane yelled her name. I thought he would at least go off on her or something. But I am happy that he didn't. (x

There would have been problems if he did.

Well good story :D

& the chapter length is fine. Just keeps us, the readers, more curious & craving!
22.22 chapter 11 . 11/17/2009
thank you for anothe great chapter. in regards to chapter length, i think your length is just fine..obviously we crave more as readers but i like the pace and length that you have going on.
midnight84118 chapter 11 . 11/17/2009
great job
Crimsonlotus chapter 11 . 11/17/2009
if u can make youre chp longer
mel-mayr chapter 11 . 11/17/2009
i think it was nice to see a little bite of kane's alpha side. i hope he dose find out who the person in the red sports car is ! and thanks for the well wishes. i dont think it was the swin flu being its not that bad and i think i would get it 10 times worse being i am pregnant ( yes again lol) but i am getting better.
mel-mayr chapter 10 . 11/17/2009
sorry ihave been gone for a few day, i have been sick. but what i just read was yet again great lol. keep it up and cant wait to read more.
maya884 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
This is really good and thank you for updating all most every day.
NovelS chapter 10 . 11/16/2009
cant wait until next time:)
Destiny1406 chapter 10 . 11/16/2009
UPdate soon please! good chapter, but please make them longer! lol! i want more!

haybell :)
midnight84118 chapter 10 . 11/16/2009
great job

i hope she kick the guy/girl a$$
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