Reviews for The Mating
DarkxImagination chapter 9 . 11/16/2009
GO Elise! Marla is such a jerk P Thanks 4 being a fast updater. I wonder who the reckless driver was? I hope her and Kane have some alone time soon or somthin. Its sad that he's never with her. I like how Elise is being so brave ]]
Memory Chase chapter 9 . 11/16/2009
Imma keep it short and just say i cant wait for more!
Rosey-Blue chapter 9 . 11/16/2009
Go Elise!

Elise standing up for herself was my favorite part.

was it Marla, who was driving the car? i wonder who else hates Elise.

description of the outdoors was good.

good chapter.
gallowsCalibrator chapter 9 . 11/16/2009
Awesome story so far! Can't wait for you to update!

Illumined chapter 9 . 11/15/2009
So, I'm finally here :D

I think it's high time I reviewed eh?

As I mentioned to you before,

I believe this is a really promising story...

One of the things that I like most about it is that you're not rushing with the story. Unlike most other stories in this genre dealing with mating, you have given it a very steady and relaxed pace instead of bombarding the reader with one major incident after another. Instead, you've chosen to concentrate on the protagonist and her relationship with the new people and changes in her life. Hence, despite the supernatural aspect of this story, you've made it very 'human'. That's something that successfully creates a connection between the reader and Elise.

I'm also rather glad that you choose the arranged marriage sort of mating instead of the traditional, fairy tale-ish idea of mates that we most often see in the supernatural genre

I'm one of those people that consider character development one of the most important (& challenging) aspects of writing any story. Many of my favourite stories have slightly flawed plots, but brilliant characterization. Which is why I'm glad you chose to concentrate on this particular aspect instead of jumping into plotting.

Your writing shows that you seem to be very aware of your characterization. And that's something that I really appreciate in a writer.

Looking forward to judging your other story. :D


22.22 chapter 9 . 11/15/2009
this is such a great story! i'm surprised it has such little reviews..but it's always the best works that almost go unnoticed. please keep up the good work and i love how you update almost daily! :)
Destiny1406 chapter 9 . 11/15/2009
Who ever was driving that sports car is a flat out jerk. I dont' like Marla and i'm glad she was put in her place by Elise! Update soon!
midnight84118 chapter 9 . 11/15/2009
great job

i couldnt siop reading it keep it up i hoe to see more as soon as you can get them/it out
Hawaiianlover chapter 9 . 11/15/2009
Your Story is incredibly AWESOME!
IntoxicatingSeduction chapter 9 . 11/15/2009
Marla needs a good smack to the face! Elise should get on it soon! lol Good chapter, I wonder who is the owner of the car?
Dark-Passion67 chapter 9 . 11/15/2009
Go Elise!

I can already tell theres going to be more problems between the two of them...and I can't wait to see what happens!

Will we every get a chapter in Kane's POV?
NovelS chapter 9 . 11/15/2009
i adore this story!
autumnsprite chapter 8 . 11/14/2009
I love this story, and i love kane as her mate. He's turned out to be quite a guy :D I can't wait for more!
Destiny1406 chapter 8 . 11/14/2009
Good chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter cause you told me i would especially like that one! Pleae update soon! thanks!

Haybell :)
blackrule chapter 8 . 11/14/2009
hm does this signal the start of the battle for Alpha or does it mean something else or is it just what it seems to be? hehehe guess we'll have to wait :P
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