These have been a few interesting characters. I do enjoy this story, and I regret to say this, but it is moving a little to slowly. Or is this intentional that Elise's passivity will lead to her freaking out soon?

i really like ur story...i feel like kane does not really care for her sometimes and what with the other girl does she like kane also

Not the most original of ideas but well-written and interesting characters, looking forward to more. I hope Elise will show that backbone of hers that's assured she has. And would also like seeing the characters develop and get more depth and shades as the story progresses. :-)

I love the story so far and I can't wait to read more!

Did Marla have her eye on Kane before Elise came into the picture?

I wonder if she's going to go back to the old ways and challenge Elise for her position as the Alpha's mate..hmm

UPdate soon! i like this so far, just wish it could be longer! i want to see mroe of her and Kane together!

Haybell :)

i love the story! & the fact that you update regurally!

aha! Swift response! lol I look forward to tomorrow then :)

tsk leaving her alone for so many hours, poor Elise. I would most definitely have a look on my own if I was left alone for that long. Or fall asleep...or even read a book if there was one around. It's kinda hard to make new friends and meet new people. Anyway can't wait for the next chappie. What's new about that though? lol ;)

I'm so glad that I have discovered this story. It's very interesting and I think it's amazing the speed you update! Thank you so much and please keep up with the good work.

another grat chapter. i cant wait to see what happens when she is aprocked by the other pack members alone.

thnk u so much for the quick update. you're freaking awesome! :D

loving the story so far. can't wait for the nxt update!

the sex at the beginning was Just right.

i don't think Elise is annoying. her life was uprooted n her plans n dreams were ruined, and now she has to worry about the type of life she's gonna have with a complete stranger n fitting in with his pack, and lets not forget the rude, bitchy women with "issues" (i'm guessing she's Kane's, x ). i wouldn't be happy in this situation either.

about Kane. well, don't know much about him yet but i hope that he stands up for Elise if Marla continues to be rude to her, in front of him or behind his back.

the description is fine, a little more dialogue would be good.

hmm... what else...

well that's for now.

i love your story.

i don't have to tell you to update soon, coz i know that you will ;)

I absolutely love this story. Your doing a GREAT job ] And elise isn't annoying at all and the whole fight story kinda made it seem like she finally knows something about Kane. And i have a feeling this new girl 'Marla' is gonna put a punch of drama into the story ] Can't wait till the next chapter and by the way ur TOTALLY rite about authors who don't update stories!P

I like where yous story is going.