Reviews for The Mating
kone4 chapter 8 . 11/14/2009
These have been a few interesting characters. I do enjoy this story, and I regret to say this, but it is moving a little to slowly. Or is this intentional that Elise's passivity will lead to her freaking out soon?
lovebookz chapter 7 . 11/14/2009
i really like ur story...i feel like kane does not really care for her sometimes and what with the other girl does she like kane also
the Pearl chapter 7 . 11/14/2009
Not the most original of ideas but well-written and interesting characters, looking forward to more. I hope Elise will show that backbone of hers that's assured she has. And would also like seeing the characters develop and get more depth and shades as the story progresses. :-)
Dark-Passion67 chapter 7 . 11/13/2009
I love the story so far and I can't wait to read more!

Did Marla have her eye on Kane before Elise came into the picture?

I wonder if she's going to go back to the old ways and challenge Elise for her position as the Alpha's mate..hmm
Destiny1406 chapter 7 . 11/13/2009
UPdate soon! i like this so far, just wish it could be longer! i want to see mroe of her and Kane together!

Haybell :)
NovelS chapter 7 . 11/13/2009
i love the story! & the fact that you update regurally!
blackrule chapter 7 . 11/13/2009
aha! Swift response! lol I look forward to tomorrow then :)
blackrule chapter 6 . 11/13/2009
tsk leaving her alone for so many hours, poor Elise. I would most definitely have a look on my own if I was left alone for that long. Or fall asleep...or even read a book if there was one around. It's kinda hard to make new friends and meet new people. Anyway can't wait for the next chappie. What's new about that though? lol ;)
Chocorange888 chapter 6 . 11/13/2009
I'm so glad that I have discovered this story. It's very interesting and I think it's amazing the speed you update! Thank you so much and please keep up with the good work.
mel-mayr chapter 6 . 11/13/2009
another grat chapter. i cant wait to see what happens when she is aprocked by the other pack members alone.
MelGrl chapter 6 . 11/12/2009
thnk u so much for the quick update. you're freaking awesome! :D
MelGrl chapter 5 . 11/12/2009
loving the story so far. can't wait for the nxt update!
Rosey-Blue chapter 5 . 11/11/2009
the sex at the beginning was Just right.

i don't think Elise is annoying. her life was uprooted n her plans n dreams were ruined, and now she has to worry about the type of life she's gonna have with a complete stranger n fitting in with his pack, and lets not forget the rude, bitchy women with "issues" (i'm guessing she's Kane's, x ). i wouldn't be happy in this situation either.

about Kane. well, don't know much about him yet but i hope that he stands up for Elise if Marla continues to be rude to her, in front of him or behind his back.

the description is fine, a little more dialogue would be good.

hmm... what else...

well that's for now.

i love your story.

i don't have to tell you to update soon, coz i know that you will ;)
DarkxImagination chapter 5 . 11/10/2009
I absolutely love this story. Your doing a GREAT job ] And elise isn't annoying at all and the whole fight story kinda made it seem like she finally knows something about Kane. And i have a feeling this new girl 'Marla' is gonna put a punch of drama into the story ] Can't wait till the next chapter and by the way ur TOTALLY rite about authors who don't update stories!P
miquest chapter 5 . 11/9/2009
I like where yous story is going.
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