|Reviews for chapped lips|
| Isca chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
"My thoughts are on your hands as they grow curious and brave." I like this line - it's very sweet and it made me smile. :)
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
I adore the second stanza, its so true.
| Jaycee M chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
I loved the imagery in this.
It was so cute.
Yet deep in a sense.
Good job :)