Reviews for At the abbey gate
estrellas chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
lovely and wonderful. a haiku delicately woven with narrative. i love this.
Princess-anna57 chapter 3 . 11/12/2010
This is great! I don't have anything else to say except write on!

~Anna~ _
lymli chapter 3 . 11/9/2010
I like this one, it's like being one with the nature.
Punslinger chapter 3 . 11/6/2010
I hadn't read the first two chapters and I'm impressed by the way you added a line to round out the poem. Some purists might complain that you spoiled the haiku, but on the other hand you may have created a new form of it. The third chapter is also quite impressive. I might have been tempted to make the last word "converge," but "converse" offers interesting possibilities.
FootstepsToNowhere chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
It's a soft sort of poem. Don't you just love haiku? :)