Reviews for Forbidden Slave |
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![]() ![]() ![]() halo author, i am an editor from fast growing platform, i would love to offer you something related to your work, may i know how to reach you professionally? |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHHH your back! Its been so soo long, please update when you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have searched low and above for your story forbidden slave but I can't find it the link you dropped in chapter two is of no help , since 2016 I have been searching please help |
![]() ![]() continue |
![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() What happened to the other chapters? |
![]() ![]() Type your review here. can't find chapter 2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() CARRY ON |
![]() ![]() you need to update this story and don't give up on it, it's so good. |
![]() ![]() Good premise but not well executed. It would do you well to get an editor and a book on dialogue. Good start though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! If you re-wrote or have an updated version of this, would you send me a link? |
![]() ![]() End of the line for me I am afraid, bit to long going nowhere fast. |
![]() ![]() Why does Nathaniel always strip her naked at Night before she sleeps, just want to know ! |
![]() ![]() Pretty pls update soon, I sOooO love this story, pls continue pls... |
![]() ![]() Really love this story, the sensation I felt reading really took me by suprise, I have never felt my body jerk up like this before. I really wish u deciede to continue this story and I wish u the best with your up coming stories |