Reviews for Never
dragonDraw chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
i could really feel this one :o i love it
nobody's dream girl chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Oh so beautiful &inspiring
xOneLastingImpressionx chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
A very deep and emotional piece, but also very pretty :)
aeolyn chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
The emotions are really strong in your poem and I love the ending lines. Great job!
seagreen03 chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
i m soo envious! u re so good in poetry! love the part of the first raindrop-fragile and broken and the last paragraph
name redacted chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Interesting, almost prosey feel. The style seems very personal, like it's thoughts intended for the one person it adresses. My only suggestion is to proofread, because there are a few (possibly intentional?) grammatical errors, such as the lack of an article before "cloudy one" in the first line. Also, some awkwardness in the phrase "the tears of yours" (consider "those" instead of "the" maybe). Still, great poem.
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
Mein Gott, wie traurig, aber trotzdem gut!

Wie geht es eigentlich deinem Vater?
nickyO chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Lyrical and gorgeous and sad. Love the part about the hands and the repeation of "you keep saying you never cry".
Saurosuchus chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
this was lovely. the imagery of the character watching the sky and anticipating the rain was especially refreshing and emitted a feeling throughout the whole piece that caused the reader to truly relate and feel the emotions of the character.
MoonlightRouge chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
beautiful poem, I LOVE The first line great work

keep it up