Reviews for Decay
dragonDraw chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
XD this one made me laugh out Loud
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
I love all fairytale references lol. This was good, felt playful
M o n o t o n eL i k e n e s s chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
Now that was precious. Fairy tales, nursery rhymes and other older volumes are really easy to twist around. (Just a suggestion.) :3

*giggles* Asshole knight.
drink me pretty chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
snarky. i love the way you've twisted fairytales to sound, well, ridiculous.

most princes are retards in tin foil, anyway.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Haha this is pretty funny, I like the tone here a lot. Well done and keep at it!

Anna _
Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
(Thanks for reviewing my story Mein Volk's Land!Do you know German?)

Anyhow here is my review!:

This poem brings to mind chaos and destruction which fairy tales hide. The line "aren't you sick of fairy tales" is true to the nth degree.

I am like this with Disney "Really? So your STILL going to put out same old prince saves princess happily ever after plots?"

(many fairy tales did not originate as happily ever after stories after all eh?)

Thanks again for the review :D
Wishdreamer89 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
woah that was interesting. it really sparked my attention. its different and i love the mix of the classic fairytales.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
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"stop rescuing girls that thinks"... rescuing girls who think

I didn't get the part about killing them and making them stay. Wouldn't you want them alive if they're staying?

Other than that I liked it. The fairytale references were interesting and well done. I think you put a good amount of anger in there as well.
Not An Account chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
XD Awesome.

I am in actual love with this poem, since i kind of love ones that pull fairytales apart, or make them malicious in anyway.

I love the last line 'Aren't you getting sick of fairytales' because it is just so true.
Kushe Gothel chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
┬┐Eso es lo que dice una brujita? xD
Lumi75 chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
haha...what a disturbing poem, lol. After sleeping beauty has come to life it might be disturbing for her to take a life. ;

well I suppose some people are like butterflies who flit all over the place but some people are the roses that are rooted to the land! However the butterfly shouldn't expect the rose always to be there waiting for him! ;P

hello! I wanna thank you for being my very first reviewer. Thanks for being wonderful.