Reviews for there's so much less to say
thinking.about.thinking chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
I love these lines:

"so I feed the words I’d give you

to letters and the internet."

.thinking
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
simplistically beautiful.
Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Simple and brutal. I can definitely empathise with the sentiments here. One thing though, perhaps use an ellipsis at the end of the second stanza? It feels like it should trail off and that would be a good indication of such.

Oh and do you mean "your" on the first line of the second stanza?

Nicely done though.

Midnight