Reviews for Don't Tempt Me, Genie |
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![]() ![]() you are awwwwwwwesome! Pls giv us some vampire! A ring you wear(selver ring with a crimson ruby/ lapis lazuli gem?) to summon a vampire? An pls throw in an eguptian god somewhere ( summon by a clay statue?) for us?. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great story! :D How you are able to make so many different types of characters, and make it so every single one is believable and relatable is beyond me. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good! more please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh crap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Clever and very entertaining, I really like Tsuki, he is so fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great find a genie story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() luuved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an interesting and cute story, but you could use a beta to catch the words that were used improperly. Either way though, I still enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good work, I enjoyed it _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, I'm enjoying the story. Very interesting _ Only found one in this chapter: "Did that ball nock your brains out?" I think you meant Knock. Nock is actually 'a metal or plastic piece at the end of an arrow, having a notch for the bowstring.' |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's two in this one: Do you need to -fallow- him around 'Follow' unless your from a country that spells it the other way ... in which case forget I mentioned it . lol Too bad you haven't heard him sigh in his sleep when he's -cureless- up next to your warm body. I believe you meant 'curls' On another note, I am enjoying the story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay found another ... and this one is actually a pet peeve of mine. but the pair -defiantly- looked nothing alike. You meant 'Definitely'. Spelling wise, it's easy to get them mixed up, spell checker likes making any misspelling into defiantly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I think I found one mistake in this chapter: found himself in the -passions on- lots of items from around the world. I think you meant 'Possession of' ... or I just didn't understand the sentence lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet~ I find myself getting hooked more and more with each story of yours I've read... Granted, I've only read 2 so far, but! I'm definitely looking forward to reading the rest of your stories~ ;P (and reading more of the supernatural pairings- totally loved the incubus series! ;D) |
![]() ![]() ![]() really cute little story. good job! |