|Reviews for Fruit on Forbidden Land|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Ending the phrase in a preposition, is a no-no. The grammar person in me is really bothered by this.
It's a nice little piece. The word yearn works well. However, it seemed like it needed more. The piece is kind of expected and a description of something we've all heard before.
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| nickyO chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
I'm glad I just packed my lunch box because you just took me to school. ;) Nice job.
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Sucinct and lovely. :)