Reviews for Celestia of the Thorns
chng234 chapter 2 . 11/14/2009
i believe shaul has fallen for cels
Chocorange888 chapter 2 . 11/14/2009
Oh I can't wait to find out Shaul's real intentions, it would be very amusing. Thank you for the chapter, I can't wait for the next one :)
flunkybubbleshorts chapter 2 . 11/14/2009
Oh. Quick moving! At the beginning of the chapter i thought the brother's wouldn't make an appearance till the next one!

Anyways - Shaul seems like trouble :)

But the descriptiveness that was present in your previous chapter seems missing..

Sukanya
JWood chapter 2 . 11/13/2009
I am definitely loving you right now. haha.
asianinvasion0530 chapter 2 . 11/13/2009
Hmm well this just got more interesting haha.

I'm not gonna lie, Shaul seems kinda like a brute to me. But I'll probably warm up to him eventually.
quotata chapter 2 . 11/13/2009
Crazy prince...

This really makes things interesting doesn't it?

Love the chapter!
AsakuraX chapter 2 . 11/13/2009
It was a really good chapter. It introduced stuff I didn't really expect. I personally can't wait for the next part
Hazelnut Romance chapter 2 . 11/13/2009
things will get interesting now that shaul is here. update asap!
xxXNightsareDaysXxx chapter 2 . 11/13/2009
Oh...Shaul!...Bad brothers/guys are always the greatest!
CrossMyHeart chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
You should continue this one! Its good!

(... everything i could think of to say (type) sounded really cheesy, but i do mean it!)
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Nice one :P And 23 reviews? Girl, people are liking this one a whole lot. My review count isn't half as encouraging :P I like your main character, she's cool. And pro-feminism with her sneaking around in 'scandalous' - or for that time - clothing ;) Luck and more luck with NaNo! I'm working hard at it too.
Jainblu chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Hiya- I'm sorry to hear that you're ill... again :(

I am so looking forward to seeing how this pans out. I like that it has an old time feel to it, along with something other-wordly. From what I have seen of Celeste i have a feeling she is going to turn out to be quite a spunky protagonist.

I think you have a really good hold on your writing if this is what you produced on the NaNoWriMo clock...

Also i am glad i saved this till the evening, because it was such a nice thing to curl up to after a tiring day.

Take care of yourself okay... maybe go see a doctor?

]

xx

Azeeat/Adeola
Jess chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
I love it so far. Keep up the good work.
xxXNightsareDaysXxx chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
Awesome first chap!

Reminds me of Ella Enchanted, and I loved that book! A fairytale that has a lot of historical components but the words make you travel to the border between the past and the present. Wow, lol...that was deep!1 hahaha..

Anyways, good chap!
caralene chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
Very promising! I like this.
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