Reviews for Celestia of the Thorns
matchutea chapter 14 . 1/2/2011
Great Job with updating. ;D

Chapter is very excellent.

I wish there were more moments with Celestia and Shaul.

Although Nolan and Levi are cool,

I still want to see the other brothers as well.

Please update soon,

as possible.

Thanks again. ;D
flunkybubbleshorts chapter 14 . 1/2/2011
Do you think your husband would mind terribly if I told you I heart you? Its true, I do. Deeply.

Shaul keeps turning up - which is definitely good. Though I do think he went from Strong And Silent to Adoring really quick. Especially in this one. When is he REALLY gonna turn up and steal the show though?

And that Poll of yours is unfair. Shaul is the eternal hero, Levi is everything you want in a man, Nolan is the awesomest, fun-est brother/best-friend to have, Dmitry is that sweet adoring guy who loves you and Nikos is that fun kid brother. WHO AM I SUPPOSED TO PICK? :)
quotata chapter 14 . 1/2/2011
And the Isles are finally revealed!

*pops some streamers*

Normally, I would say: And now the adventure may begin!

But considering how many twists and turns you've already put into the story, it seems inappropriate. Þ

It amuses me that Celeste knows everyone so well though. Actions can be understood, questions anticipated, emotions gaged. Even family members and extremely emotionally intelligent people have their limits don't they? I'm worried you're injecting a little too much of your knowledge as the author into Celeste in that sense.

Having said that though, it's clear that you want to show the development of relationships between characters and I love how close Celeste, Levi and Nolan have gotten! )

Thanks for the chapter! Happy New Year!
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 14 . 1/2/2011
Darn, that's all the chapters.. .

Ah, the princes are simply adorable. I just for a moment thought, which is my favourite? and found I couldn't possibly choose. I want one for my very own.

(and that's weird, i just looked at your poll question...)

I apologise that I am not the best reviewer.. more like a commenter.

Happy new year.
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 13 . 1/2/2011
That quote is lovely.
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 12 . 1/2/2011
goddamn cliffhangers.
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 11 . 1/2/2011
Ah, the mysterious violet eyes re-enter!
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 10 . 1/2/2011
Oh my, (late) congratulations on your marriage!

That made me forget anything I might have commented on. -
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 9 . 1/2/2011
Curiouser and curiouser. What a thoroughly intriguing character you have spun.
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 8 . 1/2/2011
When it said he had knives (or did it say blades?) I imagined something far more sinister that cutting her hair. However, it seemed just as terrible.
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 5 . 1/2/2011
That is both horrific and fitting. Not sure if I like that he wrote on his face with a knife.. but it seems to be in-character, though said character seems not to be to my taste.

Shaul is a very intruiging character, but I must say I prefer Dmitriy :)
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 4 . 1/2/2011
I really like the ending to this chapter.

And your story.
fatbird33 chapter 14 . 1/2/2011
new chapter! so much excitement!

is she possessed or something? haha okay. it was a dream.

good chapter as usual. i can't wait to see more of the isle and the new kick ass character :)

best luck to writing,

MiseryLovedHer chapter 14 . 1/2/2011
just wanted to say that this is such a beautiful read (:

it will be great if you can give us some insight to shaul's feelings towards celeste (and when he started liking her) since he's still such a mysterious character
HelgaBertoni chapter 14 . 1/2/2011
Loved it, hope to see another update soon!
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