Reviews for infinite
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Love the rhyming. Vivid imagery, too, deep and somehow sad. Descriptions flow nicely too.

"You leave behind your innocence… and watch your life unfold." / "Semi-conscious thunderstorms" – love those lines, though I couldn’t explain why

Great job once more! Thank you for sharing _
cab fed hig chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
love the rhyming and fantastical descriptions and sadness.

"done with day and dawn"
fisheye lens chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
the imagery is vibrant - as always. it strikes me as profound and meaningful; maybe since i'm listening to a beautiful song while reading an equally beautiful piece of poetry.

i especially love the ending sentiment: the descriptions flow nicely into one another. there's no thinking about this: definitely added to my favorites.
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
gorgeous imagery. favorite.
FormerlyInformal chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
This is so beautiful! The imagery and flow are absolutely perfect.
with eyes looking up chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
very nice imagery...i like the effects you put into this. your personification of the thunderstorms is gorgeous. awesome job. :)
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
beautiful emotion, this is so wonderfully sad. great work.

i would love opinions from a writer like you on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
G.M.Smith chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
really like this one! very deep and awesome choice of words, all of them just seem to fit together!





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-The White Rose- Every year a girl is stolen, taken by the beast that lives in the woods. Dililah (thinking of changing name)is taken, stolen away by a monster. He falls in love with her. She falls in love with him. And the curse is broken... -story inspired by 'Beauty and the Beast'

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Mirabella chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Wonderful! I love the imagery and symbolism!
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Love it! Its so beautiful, but so sad... I love how you use the elements of nature to convey everything. Absolutely stunning!
room with a view chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Perfect, as always.