|Reviews for respiration|
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
"a little djinni to light the labyrinth" - such a beautiful unique line. :)
This is a wonderful poem. :)
| Fate Thirteen chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
I love this.
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
best poem i've read in a while.. completely honest. this is brilliant, i'm so glad i found you and this poem.
i would love opinions from a writer like you on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
| t. earnest chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
i like it so much. intelligent, not a line out of place.
| softersin chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
absolutely beautiful :)