|Reviews for The Boy who would become a God|
| Elber of Torou chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Will there be more?
There is a real sense of mystery around the Jester, and I like the way you tell the story from an urchin's eyes, without really knowing what is going on, ie. what the cape is.
Neat little piece.
| Elmion chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Very interesting start, certainly different from all the others out there. Your use of the second person is...unusual, to say the least-but I like it. The writing is solid, and the first chapter manages to reveal enough while managing the suspense. Please continue; I'm very interested in the story.