You captured that sad night perfectly. I think both those guys would be proud of you for conveying the sadness of their parting.

LuWanda

bravo

I love this... love it... It's beautiful! *hugglesqueeze*

Ah...now I understand the story behind the title. How can someone attack their own friend/brother, even if they were on opposing sides? Great story, the plot really touched me...gave me an idea for a war fic of my own.

Very inspiring! Keep writing~