|Reviews for zero gravity|
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
a bit repetitive,
i like the sensory details; sometimes the only way to paint a picture of the scene you want, you have to use such a simple but effective structure
| 16andbreggers chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Oh, this is so dreamy u
I'm digging how this is short and sweet, without rhyming. and the imagery is gentle and smooth, if that makes any sense. x)
my favorite lines are the last two. Keep it up!
| hellopepper chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
I love the imagery here, and how you add each sense to the picture line by line. I'd pick a favourite line but I think my favourite is every other line; all of them are so pretty and so evocative. (:
| DazzlinDreams chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
Beautiful imagery and strong word choices.
My favorite line is, "i touch the stars,
hanging down low at midnight, caught."
I also like how you incorporated the use of your senses in every line of the poem. Well done!
| letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
I kind of imagine someone on a swing at dusk...
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
beautiful. it held a nice rhythm and contained imagery that is simply breath taking. i love your writing
| vulnerata chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
"i see the clouds getting darker,
filling with lightning too shy to come out"
i love it!
| G.M.Smith chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
nice poem, really beautiful! (did you know that Barophobia is a fear of gravity? i don't know what this has to do with the poem by i always thought it was interesting. -yea, very random-)
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