Reviews for If
castiel89 chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
When Lorenzo left for the army I was so afraid that you were goin to have him go overseas and have him be killed in the line of duty, and Serena would never get the chance to tell him how she felt.

So, I breathed a huge sigh of relief when he showed up on Halloween! (I take it it was him). And even more joyful when they got married! YAY for happy endings! :)

I wish we could've learned more about what happened to her brother though (unless I completely missed that part). It was sad reading that he went missing, and I wanted to see a happy ending on that situation too.

But overall a great one-shot!