Hey, this story is off to a great start. I'm already into the ghost's character.
JD Fly

God, this story was so amazing. Mike was so sweet and charming! Great plot!
Regards,
Diane.

congratulations on your book!
it is a pretty shae that Im not from the US.. would you still mail it to other countries? I can cover up the costs :)
I've been following this story since forever and a half (falling over me) and though Im sad that it seems that you were busy somewhere else, lol!
again congrats!
hannalaredo( ) .br

How can Mike go through Lara's closet and open drawers if he's a ghost and supposedly cannot feel/touch anything beyond himself and Lara? Is that explained later in the story?

Generally, I'm cynical about romances, but you're first chapter is so engaging! I cannot wait to continue reading!

OMG! I absolutely loved this story. I wasn't sure,but I saw this old movie which was like this and I fell in love with the movie, so I thought I would give this a try and loved this story too! By the way, the old movie is The Ghost and Mrs. Muir (the whole movie is on YouTube- but have to admit yours was better!). The movie is with Rex Harrison and Gene Tierney. I would recommend you trying the movie out.

Hello!

Oh my gosh, I have been neglecting reading your stories, I'm sorry, I've just been uber busy. I will be trying to catch up with the rest of them though (even though I have exams and this will only contribute to my procrastination time :P).

I really enjoyed this story, it was really good. I loved the concept of it and her ex-fiance was a total jerk if I do say so myself.

There was just one thing I didn't understand (and this may just have been me), with Lara's best friend, I thought she met her at an interview when she moved to New York which meant they wouldn't have known each other very long but when they met up for a coffee it seemed like they'd been best friends since quite a while back... I don't know, maybe I missed something there.

Other than that, I yet again very much enjoyed it. I also hope tht everything works out for them eventually :)

So I'm just letting you know,

But this is probably one of the most creative and inspiring stories I've read on here in a while. Kudos to you my dear, you've made me a believer.

Thank you so much for giving me a view into the world of Mike and Lara. Their story is truly one for the ages.

THC

very well written story _

i wish brett admitted he cheated though! that would have been the icing on the cake

:D

you should DEFINITELY consider a sequel

perhaps maybe seeing if things change in regards to only lara seeing him !

Before I continue reading and forget, Patricia Bones and Daniel Brennan...reference to Bones the show? Or am I just overanalyzing?

I loved this story and I thought it was adorable. It was realistic, too, especially given that it's a ghost story. :) The one thing I didn't like was how she heartlessly left Brett at the alter. He wasn't a completely terribly boyfriend, but she didnt' even offer him so much as an apology and barely second glance. It didn't sit quite well with me. Otherwise I loved the ending.

Also, I have a question. What would people see if Mike is wearing a trench coat? Because he gave it to Lara at one point, so it is tangible. So what would it look like to an outsider? It's kind of complicated, because Lara herself CAN touch him. lol

Anyway, great story. It was cute.

aw!

it's so cute!

and they finally admitted it!

aw!

love it love it love it!

oh!

i really like it so far!

i am marking my spot so i can come back and finish it

hahaha love the last line! So happy that everything worked out! yay! great ending to a wonderful story!

Haha that was great! I liked it, although falling in love with a ghost must be difficult.. ;p

Good luck with the rest of your writing and you have a lovely Monday too!

med