|Reviews for In the Line of Duty|
| dru83 chapter 66 . 3/10/2010
Well, I hadn't checked on this story in a while and was pleasantly suprised to see that there were almost twenty new chapters from where I had left off. It was also nice to see that you're busy working on the next one. I really liked this one. There were a few times where I felt that it dragged on just a little bit too much, though. Also, there were a few spelling/grammatical errors. Otherwise, it's a nice piece. If you want help proofing/revising either this one or the new one send me a pm or email.
| FIIGMO-India-Mike-November chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
This is like a novel.
Oh boy this will take a few weeks to finish
| MelOta chapter 30 . 12/23/2009
well it took me ages to read this far and i must say im very impressed. I struggle to find a flaw with this. Very good.