|Reviews for The Aesthetic Hybridizing The Penetrated|
| WonderlandAsylum chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
So far i really like it. Nothing really to critisize, you gave just enough description for us to know what was happening and you didn't over do the detail which is good.
In the last paragraph the only mistake i saw was "make sense of several days", I'm assuming you meant for instead of Of... since i know the little things annoy you. But as i said, its a good start, I'm curious so um... Update quick cause i wanna know what happens.