Wow, this is really good. The concept is totally original and I love the world building you've done so far.
Can't wait to see where you take this, the suspense is already getting to me :)

Curse you for my lack of sleep, just had to read this all in one go. xD
Can't wait to see how this is going to end/wrap up.

Loving this story! Normally I don't read the supernatural genre but you've changed my mind :)

I hope you update soon; you're very talented.

-J

Whew. I read this all in one day! It's really good. So detailed, and not corny. You give the characters depth instead of only giving them surface traits. I'm guessing Katie is the girl from the picture? And yay, she finally cut it off with Chris, but I have a feeling it won't be the last we see of him. I can't wait till your next update. :)

Woah this is long did it take to plan this? Where did you get the idea? Contact me to reply at wickedforlife a fanfiction please if you can!

wow you're n amazing writer! I read this b/c i loved Romeo. Normally i hate ll supernatural stories but the prologue and ch1 really got me latched on! Keep up the good work. Alli is an amazing character as is Jadin. You really know how to make a character 3d. I was relating to Jadin a lot (creepy cuz he's like a Grim Reaper LOl) but thats what aces a good writer as I'm sure you know.

This is so good! I'm dying to know what happens next! You're brothers are right to make you write this!

Please update it soon!

Cliffhanger! I'm really into this story. Can't wait for the next update!

- J

I really like this story! It's got me wanting more. It's so good. I really wish you'd update,, :(

I am completely entranced by this story. So completely original and delightfully well written. I love the way you captured the raw aspect of human emotions and actions.

I also really like Eli's character and what it brings out in Jadin. I'm quite curious to see just what the black dust means. Exceptional work, keep it up :)

Wow! I absolutely love this. SO well written, which is surprisingly hard to find, and the plot is way more original than most of the stuff I come across on fp. I wish this was a book so I could buy it and take it with me everywhere. Please please please finish it!

I really like this story :)

hope to read more soon!

Great job!

cool story. i'm glad the first chapter was much longer than the prologue. can't wait to read more. ;)

loved it! In fact, it sounds kind of like something my freind and I are writing together... :)

God this is actually GOOD!

I'm adding this to my favorites! (I just love these kind of stories!)