I see that you haven't updated in a while, I hope that your muse hasn't run off. Its a really good plot and I can't wait to see more.

okay you obviously dont know russian so either learn it or stop trying to write it because its unauthentic and honestly irritating. i feel like you either assumed no one would notice.

I hope her new 'people' will not get hurt by harbouring her.

Loved the chapter, please update soon :)

this story is mad i can actually imagine it in my head

Good story keep the updats coming lol keep up the good job

Oh goodness, I can't believe that they were trying to get her to kill her brother when he was working for them. I don't think leaving that car in the driveway is a good idea, Stravinsky and his men have seen it and will probably be looking for it.

Can't wait for another chapter, loved this one :)

I wish her life wasn't as sad as it it - Stravinsky is clearly a very cold-hearted, ruthless killer. I'd love to know his reasons for wanting Anaisa though, apart from forcing her to kill for him.

Can't wait for another chapter :D

It was a really good story.

I like how you actually put russian in the story instead of just writing it in english and saying it was russian.

Loved the chapter, I don't think he'll shun her for it if his actions so far are anything to go by, I think he cares for her, wants to help her and is intrigued by the things that could possibly have happened to her to put her in this situation. I really hope she'll be alright.

Can't wait to find out more, please, please update again soon :D

i like it. i like how she's got a past that's not quite behind her.

i have a similar story i just started and i'd appreciate if you'd take a look and let me know how you think i'm doing

Oh goodness - she clearly wanted nothing to do with the man that tattooed her wrists - I hope she manages to save enough money to have them removed someday if she hates them so much.

I can't wait to read more and find out where you are taking this story - I love it so far.

Please update asap :)