I love your "there's this INSERT-WORD-HERE" format. It's refreshing and original and all the inbetween. Brilliant!

I hate to say it, but I feel like this left me hanging.

It was such a cliche and I still wanted to know if they had that everlasting happily ever after, or if it was all a joke and lasted one night.

I want the reassurance that there is one measley couple out there that can sustain all of fate's tendencies (no matter how cliche it sounds, but that's all we're talking about anyways right?) and continue to love.

The cliches you held in this were like perfect. For lack of more descriptive adjective, I'll just have to say this was good. Just kidding!

This was amazing, well written and rounded, passionate, unrealistic ;), and just wonderful altogether.

You managed to bring together so many cliches and put it all in one big cliche drabble. I just loved it and the excessive use of stupid for some reason was very lovable as well:)

Hah.

That wasnt a laugh, that was a "Well that was freaking amazimgly different" noise.

Because it was. It was that cliche we've all read twenty million times written in one thousand words. You stuck with the title, and yet... It was really good. The way you wrote it was unique and civilised.

I like it.

''Then there’s that detention they served together where there was the awkward heart-to-heart, words spoken that really shouldn’t leave their lips. Or the room. Sacred, unknown to all but them...'' That is such an awesome line.

You have captured it perfectly, i think )

One shot? Hope so, it's lovelyy like this.

p.s. i reread apples and fell in love with it all over again. Lovingg the Mae makeover. Youu rock.

Aurora x

Wow. Aside from noticing a few words cut out for some reason, ("The s." and "because he s dances") I really enjoyed this drabble. It points out the obvious clichés all romances fall into, but it points out what is special about romance anyway.

This is amazing! Good job! :)