Reviews for Break the Line
Mrs. Awesomesauceness chapter 9 . 7/31/2016
Love the series. Please update when you can :)
iamleslie chapter 9 . 9/30/2014
hmmmmn...interesting..
Daggian chapter 9 . 9/24/2014
Hey, it has been years since you added anything. What happened? I see you still write. I really this.
OMNOMNOMNOM chapter 9 . 2/19/2014
dat cliffhanger tho
Guest chapter 9 . 12/23/2013
Omg, you have to write more. Im dieing here!
OnyxBuddha chapter 9 . 10/30/2013
Please UPDATE it's been years. This is a truly amazing story I just started reading it last night (10-29-13) last night and finished (10-30-13) this afternoon. The walk the line series is amazing! Don't leave it as it. Quit being a tease. 3 please update!
Black is Beautiful chapter 9 . 10/18/2013
No! You can't leave it there! Please don't keep is hanging on a cliffhanger! Please update soon!
BurstofPassion chapter 9 . 7/22/2013
What is Ava? I NEED TO KNOW!
cadencegirl1992 chapter 9 . 9/12/2012
Excellent story! Please please please finish it!
lovelyabundance chapter 9 . 8/2/2012
Please continue!
Love in All Forms chapter 9 . 3/9/2012
I really love this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this story. I am in LOVE with this story.
ll-writingfreak-ll chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
THIS IS AMAZING!

I know its been ages since you posted please do continue! i love this universe its fantastic and i hope for my sanity that you do continue and complete this story! So before i read anymore can you please tell me if you will be continuing it?

thanks!
Koreyjr chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
I can't wait til you finish this!
Lori chapter 9 . 1/13/2012
Hi!

I know it's been centuries since you last updated, but please, please, please continue! I've read The Thin Line and Walk The Line a few months ago, but I hadn't noticed this story. Imagine how thrilled I was when I came by it earlier today! I've grown very fond of these characters and I'm completely in love with Masen and just dying to read the rest of it. I'm sad, though, because of Ava. Even though I have to admit that I was a bit suspicious of how quickly she got used to them. I mean,the girl was just brought into a house full of vampires but it didn't scare her minimally. I was a bit put off by that, but I guess her not being human explains it. On the other hand, she could just be a very adaptable person. Or she was just too desperate to get out of the streets. Now that I think of it, it's the most plausible theory I have. Is there any possibility of the vampire who attacked her being more than they realized? In that case, Ava could have been originally good, but the bite did something to her, maybe? God, I'm just dying to know!

Hoping you come back to this amazing story,

Lori
Lascochick chapter 5 . 12/5/2011
Why did she have to lose her virginity... So not cliche
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