Reviews for Break the Line
Hazelnut Romance chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
can't wait till they meet!
akaCHEEKS chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
aw. haha finally! the fun begins! haha
lostlette chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
Destiny1406 chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
this was a good chapter with info on Ava! can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!

haybell :)
Lost-Souls1988 chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
First things first...I loved New Moon. Another great chapter. Poor Ava she had it so rough. I'm glad that Sophie was able to find her and that she now has some food in ther system. Can't wait to find out whats going to happen next chaper. Keep up the great work. Until next sunday. HAVE A HAPPY THANKSGIVING!
all4hydration chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
o! another one!
Diamandis chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
love this story its awesome, and i went to see new moon on friday, i LOVED IT! twilight was a little iffy, new moon was awesome :D Update soon!
ChristianAngel01 chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
whoa! Masen saw her finally! I wonder what he will do to her when he gets her I mean he can not touch her or even bit her she is still afraid hmm I also wonder what he will do when he finds out that her mother's boyfriend tried to touch her lol go there and kill him ohh speaking of which I cant believe her her life was soo tough and starving on the streets anywaz the sister to the rescue! she found her and is now taking her home
romanceaddict chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
it seemed like Ava should have been more suspicious of Sophie
PerfectChaos859 chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
aw... gotta wait til sunday for a new chapter... i have already seen new moon twice! loved it. I am really excited for those two to really meet! :-)
lostlette chapter 2 . 11/19/2009
aw that was his mate right?
Destiny1406 chapter 2 . 11/17/2009
Please update soon! This is good so far! Though it does have a lot of references to sex.. lol I still like it!

Haybell :)
Toodles chapter 2 . 11/17/2009
love it so far! Can't wait til the next update!
efra chapter 2 . 11/16/2009
Rosey-Blue chapter 2 . 11/16/2009
So excited!

oh, you HAve to update soon!
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