| Reviews for Break the Line |
|---|
   Lifes.Little.Secrets chapter 9 . 9/30/2011 Oh please oh please finish I have read your other two stories completly and I really want to finish this one! I don't know what is going to happen please please please finish this story! |
| forget to remember chapter 9 . 8/10/2011 Omg, its been too long. I've missed this story. I'm in love with this series and I hope you continue on. I'm so totally pissed at you right now, cause I liked Ava. And Masen deserves to be happy. I can't wait for the next chapter, you're an amazing writer, and this is an amazing story. I really love you're writing, you're descriptions are impeccable. I can really see, taste, feel anything you write, and that's what makes a great writer, that you're readers feel like they are in the stories. Like they are the characters. Keep up the great work, and I know one day, I'll see one of your stories published. |
| Alixermixer chapter 9 . 7/17/2011 WOW your series is really good and I really hope that you come back and finish this cause I want to know what is going on with Ava and how it seemed like the script was flipped. |
| inshapolo chapter 9 . 6/29/2011 this chapter was really really good. please update asap PLEAZ... i really want to no if there's gonna be some huge fight like between them all. and i would just like to say now that i absolutely love Will. and i also really want to no what ava is. love this story way too much. please update soon. :D |
| pinacolada123 chapter 9 . 3/9/2011 okay this is so not fair. can you puhlease upload a new chapter? i love this family and the stories. ive read all three (break,walk and a thin line) in a day ! i really wanna know what ava is and why shes being horrible and poor mason :(. ohh and triston is such a sweetheart. in every sequel its shows how much he loves his family and how much he loves marina and how mature hes become. puhlease puhlease puhlease. i'll review again and again till i reach 200 if you promise to finish the story asap ! lol. :) |
| Bubbly Girl chapter 9 . 2/27/2011 Can't wait for the next chapter! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
| chng234 chapter 9 . 1/15/2011 who is ava? is she really a half vampire? |
| killerqueen123 chapter 9 . 1/14/2011 Really you had to leave us on a cliffhanger gah! And jeez is she Ludivine like reincarnated? That would be creepy. Or wait is she like related to Ludivine somehow... I don't know. But she is rather evil just like Ludivine. By the way I loved the chapter. Please update again soon! |
| AlexsandraGabriel chapter 9 . 1/14/2011 OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! PLEASE HURRY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER D; D; D; SUCH A GOOD ENDING FOR THIS CHAP. D; PLEASE DON'T TELL ME ANYONE GOT HURT! D; I MIGHT CRY |
| animegirl214 chapter 9 . 1/14/2011 AHH! Okay. so, she's not human... WHAT IS SHE? Poor Masen. :( |
| Priscilla Shay chapter 8 . 1/11/2011 so..um..just remembered.. but, wasn't Ava the name of Marina's sister? |
| teejaywheel chapter 8 . 1/9/2011 Wonderful story can't wait till the next chapter! |
| killerqueen123 chapter 8 . 1/8/2011 Thank you for updating so quickly by the way. I only have two stories that are still updating and it's very very annoying. What is Ava? That's about the only thing running through my mind... But I doubt your going to answer that til near the end of this story. By the way are you thinking of making this a short or long story? Just-a-wondering. Thanks again for updating continuously. I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| chng234 chapter 8 . 1/8/2011 everything is so mess up now.. hope they find a solution soon |
| Lost-Souls1988 chapter 8 . 1/7/2011 This story just keeps getting more interesting each chapter. I really hope they can figure out whats going on without having to kill Ava and I don't want to think about what that would do to Masen. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |