Reviews for Break the Line
elohel chapter 3 . 1/6/2010
Awe Ava sounds adorable it's so sad how she goes through hunger and about her mom, i hope her past doesn't cause problems with her being with Masen

elohel chapter 2 . 1/6/2010
Masen will find her and they will make beautiful vamp babies... right?

haha great chapter

elohel chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
I'm so glad yo continued this story!


Belle Femme chapter 5 . 1/5/2010
Okay I've read the other two stories and I have to say, i've never been more interested in a vampire story, not even Twilight has me this captured, so you need to finish because i'm loving your series.

Great job
Jewel Rosen chapter 5 . 1/4/2010
This series is awesome! I started reading this series not a week ago, and completely fell in love with your characters! Who ever says this is anything like Twilight is on crack.

Your characters are all well rounded, and very dynamic. You have a great plot and story line from what i can see. I look forward to reading more of your stories and chapters. And hopefully some day buy a book with your name on it!

You rock with awesomeness!

Devon Parr
AlexsandraGabriel chapter 5 . 12/31/2009
Perfect :D :D :D So Cute :)
JZK chapter 5 . 12/31/2009
love the mushy bits! Mason and Ava seem to sweet together. I love the way Masen is protective of ava - its so cute and sweet
eyes-on-fire2009 chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
I loved this chapter! so worth the wait!

Update soon!
abmoreland chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
Yes, thanks for the update. Poor Ava really has been used and abused. So glad Masen is there now to take care of her and protect her. Looking forward to more soon.
cookiewolf chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
aww poor girl( cool chpater) haha your 90th review...I think...hope you reach ya goal)
Lola chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
hey, cute story so far, can't wait for the next update! I wonder, will Ava's mother be introduced into the story again?
animegirl214 chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
aw~ poor Ava. :[

Masen better take good care of her! ;P

thanks for the chapter~ cant wait for more~! :D :D :)
sneaky-fox chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
Yay! Great chapter!
Ellybeth chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
Great chapter. Absolutely love the series. Can't wait for more chapters.
TheyCallMeCliche chapter 5 . 12/29/2009
Wow, I love your stories and the thin line series is one of my favorite of online fiction that I've ever read! I love this ne story and the new twists... The only confusion I had was the names. Marina's sister in "the thin line" was named Ava so when he new mate of masen turns up with the same name it created a lot of confusion... So, not trying to be rude, but why'd you pick the same name for both girls?
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