Reviews for The Unicorn Fyria
MissNightOwl chapter 6 . 10/18/2010
I LOVED IT LOVED IT! I hope you can finish soon! I was practically whimpering bcuz there wasn't another chapter! AHH! I loved it!
MissNightOwl chapter 3 . 10/18/2010
I like it and so the name of the chapter is supposed to be the narrator right? Cuz I got confused on the last chapter.
Lomesa chapter 6 . 2/26/2010
Good chapter. The way you space the paragraphs make it so easy to read. Something about the first line, '... fear was blatant on her face.' Blatant is more like shameless, as in a blatant liar. Maybe you could replace blatant with apparent.
Lerene chapter 6 . 2/24/2010
cute chapter :)
Lomesa chapter 2 . 2/22/2010
Good chapter. I was a little confused in the first one or two paragraphs because I thought it was Freya's dream. Maybe you can make it a little bit clearer that it is William's dream.
Lomesa chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Interesting story. Hm... unicorns and werewolves? That's a new combination. Your grammar is good but sometimes your choice of words isn't completely correct. Good story.
iamdarkmetalgoddess chapter 6 . 2/20/2010
The story is awesome so far! It's nice to have another creature besides a were animals in a story. Can't wait until the next chapter.
Lerene chapter 5 . 11/30/2009
Greatly written chapter. You can really feel Fyria confusion .
Lerene chapter 4 . 11/23/2009
Great chapter _
Lerene chapter 3 . 11/16/2009
Can't wait to read more! I like it. It's a good story so far.
Lerene chapter 2 . 11/16/2009
I wasn't expecting the change of view. Still good though.
Lerene chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
sounds like a good story.