Reviews for defeat on the wayside
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
you have this unique style of writing that is so beautiful!

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
Isca chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
"So that by the time I can face it, visiting hours will be

over." Holy cow. The tone of this line is absolutely perfect - it's so impactful!

"In your shrieks, you would feel the glide of my chuckle." Oh my. What a brilliant, wicked, devilish little ending. I like it. :)
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
elegantly disturbing. disturbingly elegant.

"my scent would rot under your tongues." my favorite line.