|Reviews for What?|
| steffxnie chapter 8 . 6/12/2010
'i will be the sea, i will be the sky, i will be you. i'll be everyone you ever knew. i'll be everything. i'll be the world. i'll be you savior, and your destruction.' simply put says everything.
I like this piece, so powerful.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Oh, I can relate to this. Absolutely. And I love your username. "I want to take a fucking bath." Anyway. Yes. I shall be watching you. Keep writing! :)
| i think that maybe chapter 28 . 5/25/2010
| x account closed x chapter 27 . 3/25/2010
i think i fucking love you.
so yeah. i've got it too.
| noctema chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
it's natalie. :)
i'm glad i found you.
| i think that maybe chapter 15 . 2/8/2010
care to share the stories behind them? i'm always curious haha.
the write itself: i love your structure, the wording. everything just flows so.. rightly.
and then to have 'blue' all separated? i don't know- something about the tone of this is so todie for.
| i think that maybe chapter 14 . 2/8/2010
"something's a-cookin' in the universe juice."
i.. *gigglefit* can i steal this?
best expression ever haha.
butyeah. dreams. i like that you remember them and think about them and i like the word "vainly" here as well. mhmm.
| i think that maybe chapter 13 . 2/8/2010
the title for this would make a great write in itself haha.
hopefully you've stabled out since then, shit like that's tough.
| i think that maybe chapter 12 . 2/8/2010
yup. drugs like x, acid, shrooms, pot? legal them the fuck up haha. they are great for creativity. it's about moderation and logic, as is everything else.
anyway. also, yeah. journals without lines :)
| drink me pretty chapter 18 . 1/28/2010
love fight club.
as for the rest of the content-
well, everyone has issues.
the task is to overcome them, or
compensate for them, somehow, no?
| for shame chapter 15 . 1/23/2010
i can't imagine
but maybe you're not him.
or maybe you are.
in, like, a weird, drug-induced
sort of better robotic kind of way.
like the million dollar man.
| for shame chapter 17 . 1/23/2010
| for shame chapter 12 . 1/16/2010
i'm still on the fence with drugs.
i know what you say.
but then again, you may be a little baised.
since, you know, you're full of drugs.
the thing is, i've started up smoking.
normal cigarettes. cancer sticks, if you will.
i like the way the smoke looks.
i've done things that would make my mother cry.
(bars, clubs, back alleys littered with empty bottles.)
i've started, but it's hard for me to make the jump from semi-badass to totally out there.
& the drugs don't appeal to me that much.
i think i would rather be full of drugs than bullshit, though.
| Little girl Big world chapter 8 . 1/2/2010
This was great! My favorite part was, "it's gonna make my brain explode. splatter the walls with my creativity. bleed butterflies and octopuses and bumblebees and ladybugs." Wonderfully written
| Little girl Big world chapter 7 . 1/2/2010