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| Little girl Big world chapter 6 . 1/2/2010
I wish I could draw
| Little girl Big world chapter 5 . 1/2/2010
Is thank you for smoking a movie title? Just sounds familiar.
This is very thought provoking. Nice work
| i think that maybe chapter 11 . 12/31/2009
i don't cry either, anymore.
what this says about us? who cares.
hope the guy's okey. he should be out by now?
| andsherose chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Added to favorites.
Thank you for the stark honesty.
| i think that maybe chapter 10 . 12/13/2009
curious- why do you hate it?
"my mouth was stitched shut with convictions i wouldn't know i had until later." get out of my head, will ya?
| i think that maybe chapter 9 . 12/13/2009
i don't know if i could, but i'd try :)
anything religious lately is kicking me in the mouth.
the image in general is striking; your observation, your question; this chapter's a succinct kind of complex.
| for shame chapter 10 . 12/12/2009
i miss marquis.
though, you may not be marquis.
i am still not sure if you are,
because even if you were by this point
i think marquis is a different marquis
from the marquis i knew, a long time
the new marquis is too far in the future
for me to tell him about my new
girlfriend or for me to say 'hey, marquis,
i plan on smoking up next friday and
i wish you were here to smoke with me', or
for me to even let him know about all
the weird shit that's been happening (because
i'm sure the old marquis would listen
and laugh, because it's a bit ironic that
my new best friend almost fucked my old
best friend, but now i am dating the old
best friend and life is very strange.) ((incidentally,
i hope you've turned the cuss filter off,
because if it is on none of that will make sense.))
i used marquis eight times.
it's a terribly addictive name.
and if you are not really marquis, in body or mind,
then you can just ignore this strange rant and
go on living your life. i hope you find what you're
| drink me pretty chapter 9 . 12/10/2009
No, but I
love the thought
| i think that maybe chapter 8 . 12/8/2009
i must have read and re-read this twenty times by now.
| drink me pretty chapter 8 . 12/2/2009
i think everyone wants to get lost in
something much greater than themselves.
| i think that maybe chapter 7 . 12/2/2009
the title for this chapter was a lovely little kick of humor.
"it's got no lines"- this could get stuck in my head for days (i mean this in a good way, hope it makes sense)
and yeah, the feeling is everywhere. (random idea- with anyone who agrees, we should do a mass co-lab?)
| drink me pretty chapter 7 . 12/1/2009
nope-no bad omen type feeling that i know of. just a rather potent distaste for everyday living.
| for shame chapter 5 . 12/1/2009
stupidity is the natural way of population control.
the tobacco industry just helps.
we should stop making safety labels to weed out all the dumbasses.
or, you know. we could just do nothing.
| for shame chapter 6 . 12/1/2009
i used to live in color, when i was a child.
but now i'm a bit more flat, a bit less extreme.
| drink me pretty chapter 6 . 11/30/2009
i've never been able to draw or paint.
words are all i have. i must admit i'm