Reviews for He Kicks Her Out of His Bed
speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
damn, this is really well written. its so creative and wel thought through, that it contrasts with the actual subject perfectly.

great work
justaforgottenface37 chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
I really enjoyed this piece. The similes are off beat but definitely work and I find a very distinct rhythm in your work. Great stuff man.