Reviews for Marionette
YourMomScreams chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I think you have a gift.

And it's a great one.

i love how you use it.

Isca chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
"Mary Mary, Little Liar,

Threw herself into the fire

Burning with her heart’s desire

Thickened smoke filled up the sky."

This, as well as the final stanza, was my favourite part of the poem - it's incredibly vivid and intriguing. :)