Reviews for Beaten
Ms.Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
One word... AWESOME! It was entirely different than the title lead me to believe (abuse) and the spacing and lines between words as if each stanZa stands out on its own.
Jinx McCrevan chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
This is simply amazing :) I think that most girls/young women can relate to this, especially that feeling of "no matter how many times you fall in love everyday?" as well as that feeling like the world is going to end, but life does go on. This rings true on a very personal level for me, and the words are fantastic!
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
that's the spirit! yeah i kind of like the ending the most. nice work.
the sun softly smiles chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
haha, this is cute and somehow serious at the same time :)

I like the part about the broken slippers, especially.

- Leila
Camilleta chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
i like it.. especially the line about no matter how broken your slippers are!
thrivingivory852 chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
WOW this is so inspirational! This was beautifully written and I am so excited I read this! Awesome job!
purplehost chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
I suppose life keeps going along no matter what. It's best to keep going along with it.
Dave500 chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Excellent poem. It's very inspirational.
writingpistachio chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Aww, I like this. I feel like this sometimes, like the grown-up world is just too pointless because all the fantastic fairy-tales are all disproven and there's too much sadness and not enough fantasy to counterbalance.

"No matter how many times

you fall in love everyday?" I loved that line.

Good work! I think there were a few typos, but it's not too bad. :]
MoonlightRouge chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
lovely poem, my favorite line the ending, amazing
Wishdreamer89 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
yes, yes i agree! lovely.
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
Die Schlußzeile bringt es genau auf den Punkt, ein gutes Gedicht!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
I like this... great job. Write on!

Anna _