Reviews for First Crushes Never Die |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() brilliant:) i really liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was so cute! You could have made it longer but yeah, the major things happened already...I was thinking that if this was the Kennedy of Texas whom Delaney met. I figured out that she was different. Thank you for writing this. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think someone plagiarized this... s/2955537/1/End_Of_It |
![]() ![]() Just wanted to say that I love this story, it's so cute (: Also, someone called "CuteBraniac" plagiarized this story. It's not exactly word-for-word, but it's incredibly similar. Here's the link if you want to check it out. s/2955537/1/End_Of_It |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW funny. i rememeber review to this already, :D all well 3 so cute, i love it ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Way better than the original. I mean I loved what you wrote the first time but you added so much more backround information and details that made it even more fluffy and realistic :) Im Just Mlssundaztood |
![]() ![]() I loved this! You're a really good writer. I just wish that you would have made it full length. All the major stuff is here already, you just have to fill it in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GReat chapter. I held my breath the whole time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One word: Sexy. ;p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe. How cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so cheesy, and yet it's actually a decent oneshot ... You've got some problems with wording where you use words that kinda-sorta make sense or sound like words that will make sense. And quite a few typos. A great job glossing over the sex ... it would have killed it if you were to go into gory details. Overall, good characterization! I would love to see more of their history as friends, though. If you were to turn this into a story, starting with a bunch of drabble-y parts from their childhood, all put together into one prologue you'd have a very perfect beginning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao x] I LOVE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope the parents agree |
![]() ![]() Very cute! I wish this could've been longer though. The idea of making it into a story would actually be very nice! :) |