Reviews for First Crushes Never Die
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
brilliant:) i really liked it!
Nothing But A Dreamer chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
It was so cute! You could have made it longer but yeah, the major things happened already...I was thinking that if this was the Kennedy of Texas whom Delaney met. I figured out that she was different. Thank you for writing this. :)
nothinglasts chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
I think someone plagiarized this...

stranger chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Just wanted to say that I love this story, it's so cute (:

Also, someone called "CuteBraniac" plagiarized this story. It's not exactly word-for-word, but it's incredibly similar.

Here's the link if you want to check it out. s/2955537/1/End_Of_It
Rosedreamer101 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
AWW funny. i rememeber review to this already, :D all well 3 so cute, i love it !
Im Just Mlssundaztood chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Way better than the original. I mean I loved what you wrote the first time but you added so much more backround information and details that made it even more fluffy and realistic :)

Im Just Mlssundaztood
Meme chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
I loved this! You're a really good writer. I just wish that you would have made it full length. All the major stuff is here already, you just have to fill it in.
chewychester chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
GReat chapter. I held my breath the whole time!
reindrops chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
One word: Sexy. ;p
Alanisaur chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Awe. How cute.
dail-of-the-air chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
It's so cheesy, and yet it's actually a decent oneshot ...

You've got some problems with wording where you use words that kinda-sorta make sense or sound like words that will make sense. And quite a few typos.

A great job glossing over the sex ... it would have killed it if you were to go into gory details.

Overall, good characterization! I would love to see more of their history as friends, though. If you were to turn this into a story, starting with a bunch of drabble-y parts from their childhood, all put together into one prologue you'd have a very perfect beginning.
x Farii chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Lmao x]

Damned to heaven chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
I hope the parents agree
Anna chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Very cute! I wish this could've been longer though. The idea of making it into a story would actually be very nice! :)
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