Reviews for Vengeance is not Jewish
Brenda Agaro chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
I like the word choice and concept. Great job. Very beautiful and intriguing.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Another thought-provoking poem.

I like the line "You and I are beyond religion, but not this"

I did think that the disparity between the length of the lines made it flow not all that smoothly.

Anyway, interesting work as always.
romanticrazzy chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
I like it, especially the last line
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Very skilled work here, dear. :) Fabulous title, as well. Love it. Keep writing! :)
Isca chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
"He calls me bird." This was my favourite line from the piece. There's just something about this piece, though, that I didn't connect with, but that may just be me, so no worries. Keep writing. :)
amavian chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Not the best of your pantoums but still a nice creation. You blend religion and love nicely, as always.