|Reviews for ink|
| risaisis chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
i love the wording in this, especially the last two. (:
a typewriter would actually be amazing. XD
| gone4good chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I love this.
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
I love the word splay in the second line!
This is amazing.
I had a typewriter once, it was awesome.
I like the sound they make when you type.
| xxmorethanthisxx chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Really interesting! I have my opinion on what it is saying but i know it is different than the next.
I would like a typewriter too, sigh.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
This is nice. The last line in particular is really lovely. Love it. Keep writing! :)
| letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Love the sound of typewriters :) You should write a poem about one!
| for shame chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
i like the idea of something so heavy and intense that it can't be carried simply on one person's shoulders.
you always come up with the most interesting pieces.
and i imagine a typewriter would be very romantic. the image of a struggling writer typing away late at night under a dim yellow bulb is one whose appeal you can't deny. but i imagine it'd be a lot more inconvenient than a laptop. haha.
just a thought.
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Love the lines in this. :)