Reviews for ink
risaisis chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
i love the wording in this, especially the last two. (:

a typewriter would actually be amazing. XD

gone4good chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I love this.
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
I love the word splay in the second line!

This is amazing.

I had a typewriter once, it was awesome.

I like the sound they make when you type.

xxmorethanthisxx chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Really interesting! I have my opinion on what it is saying but i know it is different than the next.

I would like a typewriter too, sigh.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
This is nice. The last line in particular is really lovely. Love it. Keep writing! :)
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Love the sound of typewriters :) You should write a poem about one!
for shame chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
i like the idea of something so heavy and intense that it can't be carried simply on one person's shoulders.

you always come up with the most interesting pieces.

and i imagine a typewriter would be very romantic. the image of a struggling writer typing away late at night under a dim yellow bulb is one whose appeal you can't deny. but i imagine it'd be a lot more inconvenient than a laptop. haha.

just a thought.
Mirabella chapter 1 . 11/14/2009

Love the lines in this. :)