hey

i hope your grandpa feeling better

I'll miss you while your gone it'll be a long couple of weeks.

I'll see you when you get back.

I'll miss you.

See you soon

Bye Bo

Hey M

Happy Ramadan to you too, how's your fast going?

Talk to you more tommorrow on the phone.

Miss you too:)

See ya

From Bo.

Hey M

Finaly decided to e-mail you after how long?

(Don't answer that)

How have you been?

Brother annoying watching me,

So better cut this message short.

Bye.

Hey, hows your holidays been going?

Mines boring already.

Hows yopur weekend going,

I still can't be bothered to log in,I'm at the liabray to do this it's kinda wierd.

Well see you Monday.

Hi M

I just thought you want to know that school tommorrow wednesday 6th January because of the snow so just check on Brmb tommorrow.

I'll see you when were both back at school.

Bye

Hi M

your probberly wondering why i'm reviewing instead of pming you the reason is because i hate loging in to my account.

Anyway the asembly was a nightmare apparently got offended by our asembly but she says she wasn't but who knows.

WE have a test in Quran we have loads of vocab to learn and questions to revise (help)

IN RS we are not partners it's in register order i think 6 or 7 people in 1 group.

In science we have got lab partners i'm with Simrah :{

I think your with Hana

Well i gotta go my brother moaning for me to go shop with him.

See you Monday

Hope you had a great time.

Its kinda late for this but Happy New year

WE could'nt stop saying to everyone (My brother and I)

were wierd i know :}.

The story is still great.

But you forgot to put not at the begining when you mentioned waiting patiently.

I still want more and tell the story again I'm addicted

PLEASE!

Thanks M

I'm excited to be following this story. Think what you may, but I typical read stories about death, drug abuse, all of the very negative aspects of teenage life. Surprisingly, I've yet to read one on teen pregnancy. Sure, I've watched Sixteen and Pregnant or True Life on MTV, but no books or fictionpress stories thusfar. Nothing against the subject though, I'm actually quite excited for your next post.

Hmm, as far as your story, it's very good :) I do hope that maybe as time in the story goes on either her or Jamie's memory will slowly fade in, allowing for more information on the night.

Besdies that, I have a comment that I am excited to see how Jamie and Lucy interact now that things are more serious. Actually, I'm quite excited. (for the reveal that she's pregnant to Jamie especially!) I won't get too ahead of myself just yet to start guessing whether they keep, adopt, or other chioces .. but you will get my foresights in time :D

keep up the good work