|Reviews for Chicago|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This was really nice - it felt a bit short to me though.
Great use of Sinatra and sizzle, the two fit together so isomorphicly.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Very nice. It "feels" like Chicago. I love the idea of the music
"sizzling" and having a specific color. I see it as a hot pink, but a muted hot pink, if that makes sense. The color that would be on a neon sign. Love it. Keep writing! :)
| Isca chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
"Pancake griddle streets." I really like this description - it's sweet. ;)
"This town has the shakes." Hah. Good line. :)