Reviews for Chicago
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This was really nice - it felt a bit short to me though.

Great use of Sinatra and sizzle, the two fit together so isomorphicly.

no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Very nice. It "feels" like Chicago. I love the idea of the music

"sizzling" and having a specific color. I see it as a hot pink, but a muted hot pink, if that makes sense. The color that would be on a neon sign. Love it. Keep writing! :)
Isca chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
"Pancake griddle streets." I really like this description - it's sweet. ;)

"This town has the shakes." Hah. Good line. :)