Reviews for hold your fire, heavens
thewhimsicalbard chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This is beautiful.

It reminds me of a Killers song, honestly. The command "hold your fire, heavens" really takes this poem takes the tone from something pensive to something begging and desperate and soulful. God is hopeless... Wow.

If I were to sum up the meaning of this poem and one sentence, it would be about death, and the fear of it, of every single aspect.

That barely scratches this poem's surface, I know, but that is about all I can muster.

Let me just say one more time that your language is fantastic.

A great piece of work. I'll be back for a second look, for sure.
believe in her chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
What a lovely piece!

Can't help but wonder if it was inspired by persepids meteor shower... still, so beautiful a poem.

Excellent work.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
this is absolutely incredible
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
this is truly amazing.

i love the thought of a divorced world.

i'm favoriting :)
Gone with the tide chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
The imagery is beautiful, I especially enjoy the third stanza.
lymli chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
I like the imagery in this, it's as if the night could be a great friend.