This is really good I haven't sent you a message beczsue I wantedto tget to the next cahpter. I'm planning on finishing this today. Goingto the next chapter. Bye!

Unless the girl is mute, she should talk. Kind of pointless to have a mouth and a voice if she's not going to use it. Also, if she doesn't have some legitimate excuse for not talking such as in the book "Speak" where the girl nearly got raped and stopped talking for a year; Maddie should use her voice, otherwise it's just frustrating and stupid.

is it called the red room because of the red lights? cause in my photography class we call it the dark room...

Nice plot, nice characters. But this was very slow paced, not alotta action. The sentences were very choppy, barely any flow or communication. Not very descriptive either. Maddie is probably the most boring person I've ever met, and I haven't even met her.

hey..juz read ur story...it has gud ending & nice story developmentt..luved it..keep it up.. : )

Very cute ending. Great story. I really enjoyed reading it. I liked the characters they were great together.

oh yay happy ending! I'm so happy i read this story! great work!

That was a really good story! A little slow paced for my taste, yeah. But, I think you're a very talented author, and you did very well on the story. :) Congrats :) You've won my approval, (if that means anything, lol).

Hey, you know that you put Logan instead of Noah sometimes? This is the second time I've seen it, the first was a few chapters back and I forgot to say something.

I feel physic. When Maddie always reacted the way she did to Noah I figured something happened and then I guessed she was raped because of how she acted. By the way LOVE the story! :)

yeah it was good.

So this is the end? The definite end? (You haven't changed the story's status to "complete.")

:D LOVE. Thank you for the amazing story, and for your timely updates!

I agree, this chapter was rather cheesy... haha. The ending is good though, that's all that matters. :D I enjoyed reading this. I do believe you have some talent up your sleeve.

you should totally do an epi!

You said she was anti-social, not mute. .