Reviews for Broken Hearts Breaking Walls |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aha we had some action in this chapter! I enjoyed it, and I guess i'm actually proud of Maddie too. This story is a fun read, and I plan to keep following it to the end. Happy writing :) |
![]() ![]() This is a really great story! cant wait to read more! Keep on going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK. I'm not kidding you have GOT to keep this story going. It's awesome! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this chapter alot, it is so important to the story, she has jen as a frend for sure, she stood up to rebecca and she has now started showing her relationship with noah |
![]() ![]() ![]() First to review the new chapter, yes! haha..anyway-Finally, Maddie standing up to Rebecca! She's opening up and getting used to at least showing signs of a relationship with Noah. Like that Jen is back to being the good friend she once was. Like how the story is progressing-looking forward to hearing about their families and backgrounds a little bit more too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so sweet! I like Noah, he's really nice, and seems to be able to read people well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww she got a kiss! Cute chapter, like that Noah is trying to get her out of her little shell she's built up. Hope her and Jen get close again, don't really care for Rebecca..keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OFMG I'M FREAKING JUMPING OFF THE WALL WITH THIS CHAPPY! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally a kiss! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, great chapter, i wonder what rebecas going to do to maddie when she finds out... cant wate for an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah, that was awesome! I just want maddie to have drastic change makeover with jen and send jaws dropping everywhere! :) Write another chapter soon!Please... |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah ! unexpected ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I just caught myself up by reading chapters 1-10 :) I'm not normally into the whole..high school romance fiasco. Yet, I like this. It was hard to get into, because it seemed like "Maddie does this, Maddie does that" but I guess I became more comfortable with your writing style. Not a lot of descriptions, and practically nothing about Maddie and her home and her mom, or about Noah's brother (who plays a bit of an important role, yet not many details.) I guess i'm just used to that, and I don't mean to say all this in a patronizing way! :) I am enjoying your story though, and how it's progressing slowly (but surely.) Like Maddie, the story itself is also warming up. Nicely done, and keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovesick! she is love sick! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter. |