Reviews for Broken Hearts Breaking Walls |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON! please ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no, how sad! Poor Maddie :[ But Noah did go to far with entering her drawings. I'd be mad too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *SniffleSniffle* SHO sad ))': MADIE DON'T BREAK UP WITH NOAH ! AHRGHH ! Good luck on the mnext chapter((: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, sorry it took me that long to get to the reading. Reading the last couple of chapters in a row now has been really ... don't know how to explain - so many things have happened between Maddie and Noah and Maddie's mom etc. It's like an action movie - fast paced I mean :) I have a few questions here: 1) has Maddie always been this short fused? she too seems to overreact easily 2) Noah having anger issues was a whoa! moment for me - the artistic side of him hopefully balances it out 3) why is Maddie being so against the competition - I mean when her mom didn't know about her past yet she might've been fearing that her mom thought this was a distraction too, but now - does it have something to do with her father? is he an artist or something like that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Noahs leaving?:'( That's so sad :( I like cried when I read this chapter. This story is amazing. Update soon Love Sheldon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! (sorry blond moment hehe)! Didn't see that one coming! Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() the mother daughter part with them crying and hugging was so sad it almost made me cry. |
![]() ![]() wow it was so dramatic. but really good. i knew that's what happened to her when he pointed out the clues. but i never guessed it when you wrote it in the chapters before. wow really really good! |
![]() ![]() Noah: a new student with a broken family, who seems bent on getting through Maddie's walls, despite her resistance. Can she let him in? Sounds like rape, lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! Don't break up now! This story ends happily right? I hope so. All though I don't really want it to end because I really enjoy it. I can't wait to see what happens next! What will everyones reactions be? |
![]() ![]() after reading through 28 chapters in one day, i have to admit, i'm bailing on my couch right now. they can't break up! no! My Opinion on What Happens Next: i think that they should just avoid each other the rest of the year with tension. he goes to that fancy school thing. the start of the year is hell and they're getting over each other and stuff, and they semi-do, but never completely. then she changes, becomes more open with her art and stuff, and decides to become an artist (i know you said she was gonna be a doctor or something, but she changes her mind). and they meet again at some fancy art college and incert drama here (maybe one of them can have a bf/gf or something or the dude that raped her goes to the same college and remembers her) then they're back together and blah blah blah happily ever after. the end. ta da. |
![]() ![]() That was my favourite chapter yet. Good Job! to tell you the truth this chapter kind of reminds me of a romantic anime scene. D Great Job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, a twist! I am enjoying this so far. Sorry I haven't reviewed much(: Anyway, this is creepy wierd because half way through the story I was just thinking to myself, 'They've had so many fights that their relationships is rocky and just doesn't seem worth it!' And then BAM! You fullfill my thoughts. It freaking ironic or I'm just psychic! lol, good job! I can't wait to see how this story is going to end! (x |
![]() ![]() ![]() aghh. MADDIE! Sometimes I want to strangle her...:P Update soon! |
![]() ![]() I dont read fanfics.. or fics in general. but for some reason this caught my eye. And I liked it. It's a very similar situation to me IRL. I'm a shy artist.. and he's an outgoing artist. he forced himself onto me in terms of friendship.. and it's just been amazing. Major difference is I've -ALWAYS- been super shy, lol. But this story I could relate to a lot, and its written very well and i read it all the way to the latest chapter... and look forward to new chapters. They tell me "never leave a review without at least ONE thing negative" The only thing i can think of that I didnt like so much, was that their relationship seemed kind of rushed into.. Its like 2 strangers kissing at first pretty much. Even though this is your story and thats what happened. i would have liked to see some character emotional development between maddie and noah before they kissed. *Shrug* just my opinion. It rocks, keep up the good work _ ~Cait |