Noah's real sweet. I'm still looking for some motive, though - why is he so interested?

What happened to her that makes her like that? It doesn't seemlike ahe was raped, but at the same time I see how she possibly was. Maybe she feels like it's her fault, and so is embaressed and ashamed about it.. I wonder... /:)

“Wow...your voice...isn’t at all like I expected.”

You didn't explain her voice! I guess I'll have to wait until it comes up again...

Maddie hasn't said a single word. It's kind of impressive someone can avoid speaking for so long... And I like the dialogue - which is ironic since your main character is decidedly taciturn. :D

I like Maddie. She isn't the typical heroine, I suppose. :)

that's sad that she's kicking him out. I mean I think I know why but it's true that she shouldn't leave it like it is. (Don't fix it because it's good) but in real life situations she could have just said, "It's a relationship I want to forget that's all" and such. He might have understood, but its a topic that pushes her to breakable limits. Well I am really bummed because the kicking him out and yelling about relationships past, I hope they make up. It'll be nice, and maybe the relationship she had with whoever comes back and Noah sticks up for her and all that jazz! It'll be cute, but I'll wait and see! Can't wait now! Great work!

These two act like me and my ex boyfriend. We were always arguing about something. lol

Hmph!

I wished the chapie was a bit longer!

So I would have had a longer read; anyway, it was pretty good!

(:

AW

she finally said it...but wait he didn't say it!

well it was said with the kiss probably... but he should still say it..

WOW! I am so hooked on your story. I read all 21 chapters in one sitting! I love the ups and downs that Maddie and Noah are going through. You are a great writer and I am totally anxious to see what your next chapter has to offer.

ohh! good job for them!

This just has to be my all time FAVORITE chapter you have ever writin!

I love it!

It was awesome!

:D

yay! i say chappy too! what happened her first time? thats a mystery... o.0

wow i wasnt expecting maddie to do that

was she hurt in the past?

Awesome "Chappie" I like how you made her panic and not go throough with it, most people wouldnt of put enugh thought in to a important chapter like this, so yeah!